Ozymandias Posted February 21, 2008 Report Posted February 21, 2008 I scream I cry I shout I fight I want to take you in my arms I'll kill everything that hurts I'll make the pain go away draw blade draw sword draw breath we fight I fight you fight I fear that after death I talk I laugh I see I look away stones cry and dead pray one against one hundred three thousand to one million justice is stronger truth so much bigger I am so very small we drop like flies you and I dust blown away in the wind of the oncoming train I scream You scream They're dying everywhere they can't see it and don't care smile on the outside dessicant in the middle it has to stop we're better this is bigger there is more to life than this I can cut I can sweep I sleep occasionally the madness must end will not by my hand scream cry scream try
darklingbird Posted February 22, 2008 Report Posted February 22, 2008 This is an interesting composition of Chaos. The structure and the pace both illustrate it... and to think so many poems are composed with the desire or intention of Order, that thought alone makes me appreciate this. But it's not only that thought/concept that makes me enjoy it.
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