reverie Posted January 17, 2008 Report Posted January 17, 2008 (edited) 1/16/2008 Until Do we rush through life because we are looking for someone worth slowing down for? -- I once wrote to a friend who feared no one would ever love him -- Walk a path, any path, long enough, and eventually you will pass someone wanting company along the way, and when you do pass remember to slow so they can catch up with you. He replied simply, How long? Edited January 17, 2008 by reverie
Da_Yog Posted January 17, 2008 Report Posted January 17, 2008 I think this is an example of one of your essay-poems that works, and works very well. It may take 2-3 readings to get the jist of it all but there's nothing wrong with a poem requiring multiple reads. The reply at the end adds a bit of humor to the piece as well: good for a quiet chuckle. I like it, nicely done.
reverie Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Posted January 29, 2008 1/28/2008 Until I once wrote to a friend who feared no one would ever love him: Walk long enough, and eventually you will pass someone wanting company along the way, but you must walk a bit before you can find that someone worth slowing down for. He replied simply, How long?
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