Snypiuer Posted December 22, 2007 Report Posted December 22, 2007 I went by the house that I grew up in. Wondering, what I may see on the streets and yards where, as a child, I played. Perhaps a little boy that, once, was me. Would I feel the same warm breeze upon my face? Smell the same fresh cut grass, soft beneath my feet? Would I hear familiar laughter, from yesteryears? Or see faces, left behind so long ago? But, when I looked upon the house which, as a child was so big and grand, I just knew there were parts of it I had never seen I found it small quaint Old and faded Nothing as I remembered it to be. As I stood there, I felt an emptiness - deep within me And a sudden need to cry. It was at that moment I realized, I had not come back for memories. I was there to tell my childhood goodbye.
Silver WInd Posted December 22, 2007 Report Posted December 22, 2007 I really liked this, such sweet sentiment. I think we can all relate to this, that moment when we realize things are not the way we had once thought they were, when the world does not seem quite as big, and we have that bittersweet moment of knowing something is lost. Very well done.
Guest Phoenix Posted December 22, 2007 Report Posted December 22, 2007 i love this it captures the moment exactly nicely done
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