Peredhil Posted December 18, 2007 Report Posted December 18, 2007 I pace irritably lashing my frustration as a tail, Wanting to help but you're hurting like hell, All I can do just isn't enough and life is treating you so very rough It's hard to exist at a time like this, When emotions rage. (I'm so very pissed) I know what I want to be, protective as a lion, Harder to be a man than a male there's no denyin', The situation is evolving, listening is better than problem solving It's hard to be a man when love's in pain, So much emotion. (We're going insane)
Silver WInd Posted December 19, 2007 Report Posted December 19, 2007 Nicely, down I really liked this, great rythem and flow, loved what you did with the rhyme
Mynx Posted December 19, 2007 Report Posted December 19, 2007 Ditto to all that's been said Nicely written *hugs*
Degorram Posted December 27, 2007 Report Posted December 27, 2007 I liked it very much Peredhil. I know how the receiving end feels.
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