Morgane Posted October 10, 2007 Report Posted October 10, 2007 in darkness resting wings furled eyes closed breath like thunder rustling sigh twitching limbs she dreams of hunting beneath her body fridgid nothing empty void where gods go to die
Morgane Posted October 10, 2007 Author Report Posted October 10, 2007 i had a strong feeling of discomfort when i thought of a title so i left it off
Appy Posted October 10, 2007 Report Posted October 10, 2007 I really like this, thanks for posting! It somewhat reminds me of a dragon slumbering, dreaming of the glory days. Very wistful and yet peaceful.
Peredhil Posted October 10, 2007 Report Posted October 10, 2007 Oh welcome back in a big way! *hugs* I had an image of a dragon as well. Nicely done!
Patrick Posted October 10, 2007 Report Posted October 10, 2007 Appy and Peredhil stole the idea I had of posting that this reminded me of a dragon. Great poem.
Mynx Posted October 10, 2007 Report Posted October 10, 2007 *sits with head tilted sideways and stares at the poem* Damn it, everyone says it's a dragon so now that's all I can think of! Very nicely done though I like it
Morgane Posted October 10, 2007 Author Report Posted October 10, 2007 don't worry mynx it is about a dragon was supposed to be the beginning of a story actually but turned out to be a poem weird things happen i guess....
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