Silver WInd Posted September 3, 2007 Report Posted September 3, 2007 This is done in a style I came up with, that I call Whispered Verse Entrapment Skeletal finger clasped around the bars and there would be no escape her eyes would trace across the stars like a maze ever a dead end pressed against the iron she would weep at every turn the chains snap back withering away within her cage the hope seemed to slip down the drain view of the moon a faded crescent once there was light that use to shine her fate set against her from the start a prison locked within a prison So she sings to canaries song why must beauty always perish yet wound around her voice a silver string once again put on a leash and so with each day her petals wilt away for every exit another door slams shut
lessthaninnocent Posted September 3, 2007 Report Posted September 3, 2007 Very effective the alternating lines. Very hopeless and profound. Thankyou
Silver WInd Posted September 3, 2007 Author Report Posted September 3, 2007 Thank you for your comments
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