The Night

[Silver WInd]

The Night

 

The Night yawns

it stretches out

and yet embraces

enclosing in

while it seems

to expand

dark tendrils

outreaching

a somber beauty

while awe inspiring

where fear and

fascination live

together lingering

drawn in while

your heart pulses

a beat faster

reluctantly you are

forced to draw

away and see

safety while

never forgetting

the laughing

[reverie]

cool. Reminds me some of Elizabeth Bishop (that delay thing she does). nice word economy. no punctuation?

[Silver WInd]

Thank you, I acutally quite enjoy her work. Hehe the lack of punctuation was intentinal, though I know its vaule in writing, sometimes with my poetry I think it can get in the way, and like to let things flow free.