Regel Posted August 13, 2007 Report Posted August 13, 2007 Darkness has me in its hold, I can't believe a thing I'm told Seems pointless to carry on, After all my love is gone. It's not right I say That I have to carry on this way I hurt in places I can't reach Staring at walls I can not breach This place was once my home My hearts desire is to roam To places I might like to see If only my thoughts would let me be. I worry, I fret, I stew, But sleep is all I seem to do. And wait for another day to pass I hope tomorrow is my last.
Regel Posted August 13, 2007 Author Report Posted August 13, 2007 (edited) Please note gentle readers that this poem does not express my thoughts nor feelings but was inspired by a visit to a broken hearted old man I love. Edited August 13, 2007 by Regel
Silver WInd Posted August 13, 2007 Report Posted August 13, 2007 Very touching and emotionaly provocative. I rather enjoyed it. Nice job with the rhyme scheme, it flowed very well.
WrenWind Posted August 16, 2007 Report Posted August 16, 2007 *hugs* I was a little worried when i read it at first. Very nice
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