purple_shadows Posted June 18, 2007 Report Share Posted June 18, 2007 (edited) My thoughts are twisted and tangled As I move from table to table Like naked bodies languid between the sheets Basking in the aftermath We are only what we appear to be I played dumb for you But now I acquist your bank of knowledge Forcefully And finally at peace Fall into a stoney sleep Edited June 20, 2007 by purple_shadows Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted June 18, 2007 Report Share Posted June 18, 2007 Not familiar with aquist? Did you mean acquit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
purple_shadows Posted June 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 Not familiar with aquist? Did you mean acquit? actually, i meant acquist, but forgot the c. I have fixed it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 (edited) oh, wow, that completely changes my reading of that line then. Hmm, I wish I could hear you read this. Then I could suggest some punctuation, because there seems to be a few possible ways you could read a few of the lines and depending how you read them, the meaning and emphasis could change. Edited June 20, 2007 by reverie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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