No Beginning, No Middle, No End

[Elwen]

five things have no beginning

the darkness that is cast from light

the blind leading the blind

the memory that has no memory

the words that say everything and nothing

the knowledge of how to destroy

 

four things have no middle

the dream that has been denied

the moment when everything ends

the hope that has turned to shatterglass

the broken mirror of a shattered mind

 

three things have no end

the silence of a voice that has forgotten how to speak

the darkness that lies so deep inside a man's heart

the memory that will not let go

[Peredhil]

This is absolutely amazing. It reminds me of some Celtic memory rhymes I studied, or of reading Proverbs, or pretty much any book of wisdom

Good format, good choices, nice progressions.

You've grown so much since you first came here. I'm so proud of you.

*hugs*