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Wow...

 

 

wow...

 

Very powerful. I can hardly wait to see where you go with this..

You have excellent dynamics here, little description (which works really well with writing emotions like these) and very good dialogue. I'm not all that great with giving feedback, but I wanted to at least say this.

In one word.. wow..

 

*wants more*

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