For a Friend

[Finnius]

Fluffy soft and pointy teeth,

Tapered ears and tail,

Banded rings and racoon stripes,

Howling, wolven wail -

 

Walking contradtions seem,

To be your stock in trade,

But when you look just close enough,

You're sunshine with no shade;

 

A bounding, nipping tackle,

When I always need them most,

And a warm and caring shoulder,

So to you I raise this toast -

 

You're a kind a loving friend,

(And the reason why I'm blue,)

So tumbly fun tanuki-chan,

This poem's just for you.

[Katzaniel]

Awww! That's so awesome!

[GeldrinHor]

Very nice rhyme and meter. Flows very well. Story like quality is abundant without being syrupy.

 

 

 

Excellently done!

Edited February 25, 2007 by GeldrinHor