MinimondoT Posted February 19, 2007 Report Posted February 19, 2007 Found some old poems while cleaning out some papers, thought I would post them here and see what you all thought! An Ocean of Words All the words I've ever said Placed inside an ocean drop by drop, word by word filling up the sea Every word, Every drop Swept up in the ocean Every word, Every phrase Sent back home to me Old Love How does he make me feel? that I do not know my heart flutters yet I hate it because once I loved him so his brown Eyes made me melt his Touch made me shiver his Voice made my heart go thump his Smile made me quiver his number pops up his Voice on the line Not what I was expecting so Long has it been since I awaited his call my Old love I say Goodbye Blue the blue of the sky the blue of a bay the Blue of his eyes will take me away New Love strong Hands nimble fingers blue Eyes golden curl his Smile his Eyes his Voice an Angel my love Is he perfect because I love him? Or do I love him because he's perfect? my love my angel my perfect
Whisky in Babylon Posted February 19, 2007 Report Posted February 19, 2007 I like these alot. they are all very nice and I like how most have to do with love you can really feel that when your reading
Quincunx Posted February 19, 2007 Report Posted February 19, 2007 My favorite poem of this group is "An Ocean of Words", probably because I was expecting the cliché of "message in a bottle" and instead received a message outside of the bottle.
MinimondoT Posted March 10, 2007 Author Report Posted March 10, 2007 I like these alot. they are all very nice and I like how most have to do with love you can really feel that when your reading Thank you. I tend to write most when I have a strong emotion inside that I can't get out any other way (which I am sure applies for a lot of people). It is an attempt to get that emotion out where I can see it and I am glad to share that emotion. If you can see the love in the poetry then it means I am doing a good job
MinimondoT Posted March 10, 2007 Author Report Posted March 10, 2007 My favorite poem of this group is "An Ocean of Words", probably because I was expecting the cliché of "message in a bottle" and instead received a message outside of the bottle. =0) It is kind of a random little poem but I ended up really liking the way it turned out. =0) Thank you for your description of a message outside of the bottle. I think that is really good!
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