Guest Phoenix Posted October 17, 2006 Report Posted October 17, 2006 Cut the crap Mister that knowing supercilious smirk makes me want to Slap faces into new shapes Air hisses between teeth fist-clenched against words that burst like bubbles into the ether of my brain But I smile Grit jaw and take the hits I will refuse to rise to this bait Take Your attitude Somewhere Else
Ayshela Posted October 21, 2006 Report Posted October 21, 2006 Wow. I can almost hear this spitting, a fragment at a time, between tightly clenched teeth... driven by short bursts of breath because you're so tense with tightly controlled anger you can barely breathe.
Cerulean Posted October 27, 2006 Report Posted October 27, 2006 I'll definitely second Ayshela's comments here. I like the construction of the constriction too! Great job. C.
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