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half-loved, half-lost,

torn by alias. Severed,

tacit shear of contact.

pluralist schism

: drowned by indifference.

/join love within,

/quit without

weakness, to harm.

whore words to profit,

worlds apart.

… leave the cause to be.

 

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The page you are looking for is currently unavailable. Experience, the following:

  • To take for granted, and believe they believe you believe. The undermining confidence that drains, distancing.
  • A conscious decision. Disappointment turned imagined betrayal. Lost process, painful reach: a stretch under commitment.
  • resentment, the invisible word that festers. Long drawn-out pain. Watching it fade in the universal torture of knowing.
  • The time associated to interest. Elusive and embedded in those in reach, morphing to accessible terms. People past left past for people present.

 

… more than half-lost.

near-empty html,

echoing hearts

to silence

Posted

Very different. Kind of eerie, though. I like it.

 

I guess I have an analogy for it:

 

Like one of those Cafe' poetry sessions, but...online. An online cafe'?

 

Needs a bongo drum <_<

 

But yeah, very different. Weilds a multitude of jargon, and that could be problematic to the meaning, otherwise, very cool.

Posted

Hey Wyvie,

 

When I stand back from this, like an impressionist painting, I get far more. As soon as I zoom in to a closer reading, the detail defeats me. Loved the whole, specially on an auditory level. Would love to hear you read this!

 

Thanks for a cool, provocative poem.

 

C. :)

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