Sparhawk Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 You are the one person that matters most to me Without you my life would not be the same Just being around you gives me such great joy I sometimes wonder how someone as nice and cute as you Came to be part of my life One day I hope to tell you how I really feel But until that day I hope we can always continue to be such great friends Until that day my love for you will go unspoken It's shorter than the others, but I think I kinda like this one a lot as well...
NickCall Posted October 13, 2006 Report Posted October 13, 2006 But until that day I hope we can always continue to be such great friends Until that day my love for you will go unspoken I like the parallelism there. "Until that day" repeated adds a subtle emphasis, and really empowers the last line's message.
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