NightFae Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 (edited) The touch of her skin, smooth as silk The sound of her voice, sweetly subdued The taste of her lips as they caress mine. It's nearly impossible to believe, I know, but a kiss that leads to romance and love, can quickly become another obsession. Really just something that was on my mind at the time...Comments and suggestions very much welcome(I'm using this for an English assignment, due on Wednesday). But I wrote. Which hasn't happened recently. Edited September 19, 2006 by NightFae
NightFae Posted September 19, 2006 Author Report Posted September 19, 2006 Shizznazzles. Realized I'd written something previous to this just never got around to posting it like I was meaning to. So might as well post it here before I forget...Again. Another Broken Promise I promised myself I wouldn't cry. I promised myself I wouldn't lie. But here I am, tear-stained face, Lying to keep people out of my space. I promised myself it wouldn't be them. I promised myself, not after him. Why do I let them do this to me? Why don't they just let me be? I promised myself I wouldn't cry. I promised myself I wouldn't lie. But here I am, with her in my space, Lying to keep her from seeing my face.
Peredhil Posted September 20, 2006 Report Posted September 20, 2006 I think they're both well written. Kiss her platonically for me.
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