With In Your Arms

[Tasslehoff]

-~- Just a fore-warning. This piece is very ruff. I just started writing sentence after sentence. No plans on rhymes or flow at all. Just my usual, hectic, all messy time of writing. Been a while since I've shared anything, wish it could have been better, but this will have to do. -~-

 

 

 

 

I have no clue whats right from wrong anymore

Where things werent good enough, or where we went wrong

I stay up all night looking into our stars

No longer our stars, sitting solo on this balcony

Bloodshot eyes, I cry yet another tear

Strike down another good memory as the minutes pass

I see the phone flash, feel it vibrate in my numb hands

I try to lie, let you think Im better off with out you

I tell you that I dont miss you anymore these days

Hearing your disapointment, as you try to remain strong

Feeling another piece of my heart fall

The echos of my empty chest, not much more left

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Sitting straight up, wiping the sweat & nightmares from my body

Looking over, curled up so tight, there you are

Face of an angel, looking so cold with out my warmth

Laying back down, mind at peace, heart slowing down

Glad the nightmare is over as I pull you closer

Feeling your arms wrap around me & your face on my chest

Knowing the dream would never be true, for Ill never let go

Watching the smile on your face, finally I can rest ..

[reverie]

Well, if you want to generally improve upon it, then do grammar clean it in your next draft.

 

Aposthrophes are your friend. Good material. Good grounding.

If want more indepth feedback let me know.

 

rev...