Oh How I Miss Thee

[Xaious, Master of Time]

She calls out to me from where she sits, Adorned in silver and black,

She's older than me and I don't care.

She's not the smallest one around, And sometimes likes being difficult,

But I love her all the same.

She isn't cheap and never will be, Her heart gives her problems,

And I gladly will pay any for her.

She has given me many memories, Comforted me much,

So greatly I want her back.

She's erred once or twice, Learned from these mistakes,

But the past is passed and gone.

She's made me happy many times, We'd sit together many times,

And I will have her back I swear.

I miss her more than I dare say, Some do criticize me thus,

Yet I still love and miss her.

My one and only.

Volt.

[Parmenion]

Is this it?:

 

 

Just a tiny grammatical suggestion:

 

But the past is passed and gone.

 

The word "is" is a present tense word and here you are using it to describe an event that has already taken place. I would suggest using the word "has" instead of it.

Edited August 19, 2006 by Parmenion

[Katzaniel]

Ohh, and I thought it was a car.

 

So what happened to her?

[Xaious, Master of Time]

She is, of course, a 1983 Buick Regal. Yeah, a car.

One day shortly before arriving at Nicholls for my classes that day, she ran low on oil, or lost oil pressure, I forget which was the actual case, and overheated. She spun a couple of bearings and scarred up the crankshaft, so we had to get her towed home, and she's been sitting in our yard since February. Nevertheless, as soon as I can afford to fix her, my dad and I are going to do just that.

 

Also, while the past may have passed and gone, in it's current state is is passed and gone.