Dramatics

[Dros]

the song writ hath crescendo dramatic

 

ending the measure with suspension

 

the 4/4 time begged stead to 3/6

 

new movements of 13 hath raised all tension

 

 

 

for now we wait to hear resolution

 

of the bar line that ended in minor key

 

composer anonymous has no solution....

 

to the problem that no one can truly see....

 

 

 

this is my life... a movement... a masterpiece...

 

one note to the next.... waiting for transition....

 

the threshold of forgiveness seems to have ceased...

 

no resolution for thyne sad key.... a Dminor composition....

[Zepheri]

I like this very much so. The words seem a little out of place, that's mostly due to the fact that I'm not good in reading between the lines. However from what I got from this I can tell that you are saying in it (if you mean there to be a meaning) you are comparing your life to how music flows right? Then your life is like reading music, there are rests and fast notes then slow notes... Yes? I'm I right? I don't think I am but, I still liked this and I thought it was well done, you have very interesting style and I would like to read more.

[Dros]

I like this very much so. The words seem a little out of place, that's mostly due to the fact that I'm not good in reading between the lines. However from what I got from this I can tell that you are saying in it (if you mean there to be a meaning) you are comparing your life to how music flows right? Then your life is like reading music, there are rests and fast notes then slow notes... Yes? I'm I right? I don't think I am but, I still liked this and I thought it was well done, you have very interesting style and I would like to read more.

*hugs* thank you! Yes, in this piece I was trying to prove a point to myself.... I know... weird... But it worked... I just wanted to prove to myself that music isn't only part of my life, it has become a part of Me.. Thank you again for the kind words.