WrenWind Posted May 9, 2006 Report Posted May 9, 2006 Love and passion have been packed away. The hurt and anger shoved down. All rage and sadness stored. Wrapped in a smile and tied with a bow, Every emotion held in check, controlled. The vessel is leaking. Love and passion rush to the surface. Your voice sending shivers down my spine. I am afraid to let all that emotion escape. Will it take over? Will I get lost? You touch me and I feel alive.
Sweetcherrie Posted May 9, 2006 Report Posted May 9, 2006 To me this reflects love that should not be...well, in your heart alone maybe..which is what the second stanza tells me. I think you've captured the feelings pretty well, and I'm so glad to see your back and writing. I always love the way you manage to capture feelings or thoughts with simple words, so straight to the core of things. Thank you.
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