sea vegetable Posted May 2, 2006 Report Posted May 2, 2006 A MEETING In an ocean of night Dreaming ever long Journeys with the whale Song of a soul Searching for the day Light upon dark Alleyways of my heart Beat by the rain Water like a sheet Music on corrugated Iron strength melted Wax & wane the moon Shadow I hid behind Closed doors open Hearts to windows of hope. Meetings can be truly inspirational....i recommend everyone meets more
Patrick Posted May 2, 2006 Report Posted May 2, 2006 First of all: welcome to the Pen sea vegetable! I hope you shall enjoy your stay here. This poem was really interesting, it left quite a few thoughts up to the reader to decide. I really liked the image of a "whale song of a soul".
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