Tasslehoff Posted April 11, 2006 Report Posted April 11, 2006 Im missing you when you are not near. This "forever" still brings the slightest tear. I long to hear your voice whispering in my ears. By far the sweetest music I've ever heard. Still to this day, they wait to hear the chords again. Softly; I do love you.. Ive come to believe saying "Good Bye" means, forever. So in the poem, when I say " This forever", Im reffering to when she said goodbye.
Sweetcherrie Posted April 12, 2006 Report Posted April 12, 2006 Funny the first time, and second time I read it, it felt as if the person had died, and you were saying goodbye to this person. I like the err...not sure how to call it, but in rhyme? Oh well, I like how it rhymes within the sentence. Thank you for posting
Tasslehoff Posted April 13, 2006 Author Report Posted April 13, 2006 I also like how I was able to rhyme, but a bit disapointed I couldnt finish it so. *ponders* Thanks for the comment though.
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