Solivagus Posted April 7, 2006 Report Posted April 7, 2006 I spend this time in a distant land, Without you here to understand, Despite the good things I find here, I miss you now 'cause you're not here. The sun shines bright yet still seems dim, Without your smile to let it in, Colours fade without you near, I miss you now 'cause you're not here. Wish you were here beside me now, I'll carry on though I can't see how, Despite release from my old pain, I can't wait to see you again.
NightFae Posted April 7, 2006 Report Posted April 7, 2006 Hmm...Well it would be slightly odd for you to have written a poem about missing her...And posted it in a place she she would've seen it. Anyway...That off my chest, I must say. I did like this. Something about the last two lines just throws me off. But maybe it's just me.
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