Savage Dragon Posted March 28, 2006 Report Posted March 28, 2006 I won the Love Slam contest at my HS (Go me!) and i did it without even attending thanks to a friend (Go Mike!). So i guess somebody liked them... here they are She Says it everyday And I always feel the same way The warmth that cannot be described That her words touch inside Those words that she speaks so freely Make me feel, well, touchy-feely Without worry, without fear She speaks those words so sincere Words of love, not desire Fills my head with visions of fire Simple words that burn my eyes An effect, I fear, she does not realize When the world looks too much like the mirror I can close my eyes and hear Words; heard by many, understood by few Three simple words... And the second one "L" is for the way you look at me, "O" is for the only one I see "V" is very, very extraordinary, "E" is even more than anything I adore Love is getting a little too cliché Not something we mean, it's something we say Nothing more than lyrics to a song It no longer lifts us up to where we belong The Beach Boys say Don't Worry Baby cause I Think I Love You says David Cassidy Jerry Maguire said the words, "You complete me." and a thousand heartthrobs cooed daintily I used to think those people lived in a fantasy world But that was before I met Jesse's Girl Then I saw her face, now I'm a believer meant much more to me once I'd met her New meanings to old phrases for those that care Can't Buy Me Love, but we can share What I'd do without you? God Only Knows I Want to Hold Your Hand and Never let go, never let go So here's looking at you kid, cause really you are so beautiful to me Don't Speak just Knock Three Times on the Ceiling if You Want Me Cause only The Luckiest People know what I'm talking of In the words of John Lennon, All You Need is Love
Sweetcherrie Posted April 12, 2006 Report Posted April 12, 2006 *waves* Good to see you posting again, should do it more often Nice poem btw, can see how it would've won
Lone Shadow Posted April 13, 2006 Report Posted April 13, 2006 I like how you constructed your second poem out of a bunch of one-liners from songs. I caught most of them, but I'm sure there's a few I missed.
Savage Dragon Posted April 29, 2006 Author Report Posted April 29, 2006 thanks sweetcherrie, good to be back could use the break from the everyday
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