Mira Posted February 22, 2006 Report Posted February 22, 2006 Sorry, this one's a little silly and not all that good, but I was bored on my lunch today. I have no room for waste or errorMy words they must be terseWriting on napkins I fearHas proved to be a dreadful curseAnd even though its just begunThis poem has reached its endPunctuated by a ketchup stainI once had called my friend
Sweetcherrie Posted February 22, 2006 Report Posted February 22, 2006 *giggles* I think it's pretty cool actually A bit lighter than what I normally read of you, but I can definitely appreciate sillyness like this. The only word that feels really out of place and stops me while reading is 'dreadful' Thanks
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