The Infinite Gaff

[Azuran]

Fear the infinite cycle of endless tiers
Fall into perfect liquid spheres, suspended
Incredulity, whence innocence burns through
And through the loop of exit to entrance polls
Softly at your heart, an eternal yearling ewe
Can't understand why you don't

[Sweetcherrie]

I like the way this poem is layered, layers piled on top of each other, and running next to each other.

 

It says so many things at the same time, and leaves it up to the reader to pick out his or her meaning. The choice of words rolls through my head, and I enjoyed reading this.

 

Mainly what this poem told me is things about peer pressure and naivety, feelings I know, recognize, and sometimes even fear…

 

The threshold to take decisions is different for all of us, and I think that in the end it’s mainly ourselves that wonder why we do, or do not do things.

 

Thanks