Through and Through

[Petey]

Through eyes now wiser,
I see behind me things forgotten,
With ears now longer,
I hear what was spoken,
Through a mind now sharper,
I think of what was not there,
Through a heart now colder,
I feel how I hurt you,
Through a soul now darker,
I still love you.

[Appy]

*nods silently*

 

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I like this a lot, simple yet provoking emotions... I especially love the twist with the last sentence.

 

Thanks for posting this

[Sweetcherrie]

*hugs*

 

An inner fight...life should sometimes simply stop teaching us lessons.

 

Thank you for sharing this

[cryptomancer]

through all things we do to the contary, love someehow still survives.

 

i really like this.

 

thank you

 

[WrenWind]

Well done. I am not often moved to the brink of tears. This touches a cord.

 

Thank you.