Sweetcherrie Posted November 2, 2005 Report Posted November 2, 2005 Two marbles in my hand One black, one white No way to go No way to know What is wrong And what is right Two marbles in my hand One love, one truth Two ways to go One way to know What is day And what is night Two marbles in my hand One me, one you Which way to go Do I want to know Which is friend And which is foe? Two marbles in my hand Only two
cryptomancer Posted November 2, 2005 Report Posted November 2, 2005 (edited) i love this. two paths, held in the hand as marbles, each a globe, a world that could be if chosen, i love this a lot, the simple choice and the perils of not knowing the right choice, hoping you are right, fearing you are not. simply put, wonderfully written. thank you Edited November 2, 2005 by cryptomancer
Appy Posted November 3, 2005 Report Posted November 3, 2005 *echo's crypto's words* I like this a lot, not only because it's in a style that I prefer to use myself, but because of the images it uses, and the simplicity yet deepness within it. Very, very well done, and thank you for posting. Incidentally, this is something that I would like to see in print, on a poster.. it would work
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