Regel Posted October 28, 2005 Report Posted October 28, 2005 Silent as snow falling Rising in the dark I feel it coming Pulsing like my heart. Strong and tall I'll yield to its will. Watching the coffee fall I drink it with a pill. Constant companion Bring your worst I will still manage a smile Feels like I've been cursed. Dressed and moving now A routine so well rehearsed Persuasion and invitation I quote it chapter and verse.
Sweetcherrie Posted October 28, 2005 Report Posted October 28, 2005 This is beautiful... it has a sad tone to me, but it's so real and intense that I can almost hear it being read to me. *hugs* The rhyme seems a bit forced at times, but the meaning and images...really nice
Peredhil Posted October 28, 2005 Report Posted October 28, 2005 I take this poem very personally. It is elegant and describes my aching body preparing for another beautiful day. If I'd planned on living to be this old, I think I would've made safer choices when I was younger.
Appy Posted October 29, 2005 Report Posted October 29, 2005 Simplicity with a depth, I like it.. the title's very well chosen as well. I hope one day to reach this stage.. it almost feels powerful enough to bring out the best in you.. not really sure what I'm trying to say here, but the word truimphant should be mentioned. Well done, and always good to see you here. *hugs*
WrenWind Posted November 6, 2005 Report Posted November 6, 2005 replace the coffee with tea and my mornings are similar. *hugs*
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