Appy Posted September 3, 2005 Report Posted September 3, 2005 (edited) ~ written in May, revised together with Sweetcherrie in June, finalized last night. Thanks Sweet! ~ They all scream inside my head The girls scream, both the happy and the sad anguished frustration; longing to stop the things they ought to do The Queen screams, after having found her voice angered frustration; wishing to change the things she has to do I don't scream, just sit there and hug my knees ambushed frustration; seeking to find the things I want to do They all scream inside my head Edited September 3, 2005 by Appy
Cerberus Posted September 4, 2005 Report Posted September 4, 2005 ~looks over the above post and thinks for a moment~ you know... i usualy dont like poetry very much. but this.... ~nods~ Realy though. the emotion that it presented was there for me. i dont have any tips for you or anything because...well.. i realy wouldnt know how to write one my self. So far as im concernd, you are good ta go!
Sweetcherrie Posted November 26, 2005 Report Posted November 26, 2005 methinks I should react to this.....well, should've reacted to this before... Amazing poem....even better read out loud
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