word_eyes Posted July 7, 2005 Report Posted July 7, 2005 My thoughts are homeless by their own free will, or rather speechless wandering through the empty heads of question marks avoiding the crowded adjectives sleeping under a lice ridden blanket of phrases holding onto a styrophoam cup of verbs as the run-on sentences quickly pass by tossing loose words, but never change and the successful paragraphs just look and utter "no one will hire a man who lacks proper punctuation."
reverie Posted July 8, 2005 Report Posted July 8, 2005 (edited) AWESOME! That's one of the best metaphors for the spoken articulation of thought that I've ever seen. ...hmm or unspoken in this case... Bravo, write more. oh and welcome, revery the dreamlost "elegy and epitaph" the dreamcontinues... Edited July 8, 2005 by reverie
Tattered Posted July 16, 2005 Report Posted July 16, 2005 I like it. I feel the pain as I read it. I can relate.
Parmenion Posted July 17, 2005 Report Posted July 17, 2005 "no one will hire a man who lacks proper punctuation." or spelling...
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