Wu Sa therapy time

[epinephrine]

I have written this in an emotional state so please excuse the crude rhyme and rhythm. It was intended as a form of therapy. Feel free to comment but know that I know the rhythm isnt good.

 

 

Why don't you care?

I do.

Why won't you try?

I never stop.

 

I only wish that you would see,

This stressed out angry man,

He's not really me.

 

I want to help to lift you up

And give you hope,

To fill your cup.

 

I come to broaden your view of the world,

To fill your mind with vision,

Till your eyes have unfurled.

 

So why do reject me?

Just let me teach.

I will show you things,

You think are beyond your reach.

 

I promise to care and try,

Will you promise not to let,

These brief years pass you by?

 

epinephrine

[Katzaniel]

I think you definitely need to revisit this with rhythm in mind; it's very good, as is, except for that aspect.

 

Hope the "therapy" worked for ya, and hope to see this reworked.

[Mynx]

Mynx comes in and begins to massage Epinephrine's shoulders, murmering "wuuuuu sah!" to him as she grinned and passed him a sledgehammer.

 

 

I liked it, Ep. Using emotion to write is always good.

[Cerulean]

Have you ever read 'The Lesson' by Roger McGough?

 

*smirks*