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No, the number has no significane other than it is a string of 8 digits in binary. :-) If you must know it's the number 105. :P

 

1101001

 

In a room, painted walls

In a chair, on a swivel

At a desk, near a window

Staring at a screen, darkness outside

 

Electricity pulses, ones and zeroes zip by

Darting to and fro, in wires of copper and aluminium

Carrying information, travelling to places

Opening new doors, showing new people

 

In such a manner are new people met

New friendships forged

New cultures realized

New lifetimes viewed

Without ever seeing, hearing, touching, tasting, smelling

I wouldn't give it up for the world!

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What a fascinating thought: I haven't used any of the classically-defined senses in interacting with the people here (ie, sure I'm seeing the screen etc etc but I'm not seeing a person) and yet we get along quite well.

 

I have trouble with the image of ones and zeroes zipping by, but probably only because i) it minds me of a commercial that annoys me, and ii) I know far too much about current for a sane person :P The concept in general, though, I really enjoy.

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No, the number has no significane other than it is a string of 8 digits in binary. :-) If you must know it's the number 105. :P

 

1101001

...1101001...= 7 digits?
Posted

In a computer binary number there'd be an extra 0 bit in front of that to make a complete byte.

 

Mathematically it's still correct as the preceeding 0 is implied - reading the number as 01101001 is the same thing as 1101001.

Posted

Heehee but then 105 doesn't imply a computer binary system like 1101001 and since the whole thing is about relationships over the computer it's more symbolic that way. :-)

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hehehe... i knew that....

 

great poem, well imaged protal to worlds beyond all, from the secluded and barren desk.

 

emptyness around the physical being compared to the life of curcuitry and electrics generating a new place to be.

 

I like.

 

:raven:

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Nice poem, Yog. :) I particularly like the subject matter of the piece, as it's one that's rarely dealt with yet which remains very close to home. The second stanza was my favorite with its imagery of wiring and binary code, though I also liked the structure of the first stanza. The third stanza struck me as more general and direct than the others, and was my least favorite for this reason. I'd really like to see specific friendships and cultures rather than vague outlines of them in that stanza, as the concept behind them is very intriguing.

 

Once again, nice stuff. :-) And good to see you browsing around the Mighty Pen, I might add.

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