Curious Mylo Posted April 21, 2005 Report Posted April 21, 2005 Deep into the mist Behind the sheets of blood Across the field from the knife He lays in a puddle of mud Screaming angry words Dieing in the rain Wishing it was over Just to rid himself of pain He doesnt think of others Or what his death would cause What did he think would happen When he broke so many laws? He lays there looking at the stars Watching for the last time Blood drips off his wrists As if his life's the crime Once his lungs are empty Every drop of blood is gone He's breathed every last breath He didnt live till dawn What could have made his life so bad? So bad he had to leave He only saw one way out The way his life would weave But now it all is over No way to rewind If only we knew sooner So we could change his mind
cryptomancer Posted April 22, 2005 Report Posted April 22, 2005 I like this. It has a certain frantic pace, and rather disjointed rhythm that fits the emotions of the piece. Thank you.
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