Bubbles

[Sweetcherrie]

A single bubble

Lost in space

Wanting stabilization

 

That single bubble

Was my own

Looking for integration

 

A second bubble

Came in view

Raising an expectation

 

That second bubble

Filled my void

Succeeded infiltration

 

Two single bubbles

Became one

And found their destination

 

 

Inspired by a good conversation with Venefyxatu, and revised with help from Appy.

 

Thanks guys

[Appy]

I already liked it the first time, but after you revised it, it's even better. Love the simplicity of it

 

And thanks for mentioning me, I'm glad to say though, that it's all your words only in the end, which is how it should be

 

You should write poetry more often, Appy wants to see more

[Cerulean]

*claps in appreciation*

 

Definitely one to be read aloud, I think. Thanks for posting this.

 

C

[~O~]

I tend to be rather neutral about poetry... I like prose better, because I feel that most of the time, poetry ends up giving up meaning in order to attain rhyme and rhythm.

~O~

However, I liked this poem. It's simple, but it evokes.

~O~

Oh, yeah... A verb like "evokes" demands an object. I'm feeling anti-grammatical today.

[Curious Mylo]

I like this. It's really... I don't know the word, but it's good.