Da_Yog Posted April 12, 2005 Report Share Posted April 12, 2005 Greetings everyone, this is my first time here so be gentle. I was invited by my friend Regel to post some of my poetry here, so I'm taking him up on that offer. The Sky Today I tried to write some poems today But the magic of the pen failed me The thoughs would not connect today And the words did not flow freely I tried many times to write today And the words on paper, they just piled The magic was not there today So I just relaxed and smiled. The sun it shone bright today Despite the clouds in the sky I could not write a poem today And watch the clouds roll by So I lay down my weary pen today Even as I relaxed in the grass And I did not write a poem today For such a sunset could not last. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerulean Posted April 12, 2005 Report Share Posted April 12, 2005 Hi there, What a beautiful way to announce your arrival. I'm certainly glad your pen led you here. This poem has a gentle reflective quality I really enjoyed. Thank you for posting and welcome to The Pen! Cerulean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gryphon Posted April 12, 2005 Report Share Posted April 12, 2005 I found this easy to read. Sometimes longer or more 'complex' works (for want of a better term) leave me feeling bogged down because they're difficult to get into. This was a pleasure for me to read. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regel Posted April 12, 2005 Report Share Posted April 12, 2005 So you decided to find a new home to post. I am very happy you chose to do so Yog. Welcome!! The poem is an interesting one. It deals with a subject all writers have faced, but it seems even an impass inspired you. Welcome home old friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted April 12, 2005 Report Share Posted April 12, 2005 lovely... welcome, write more. rev... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da_Yog Posted April 13, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2005 Thanks everyone for your kind words. It means much to me. I have several more waiting in the wings to post but didn't want to flood the boards with them. Most are complete but some still need a bit of tweaking. So I'm open to constructive criticism as well. Just don't be too mean. http://www.themightypen.net/public/style_emoticons/default/ohmy.gif Take care all and thanks again for the kind words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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