Regel Posted April 12, 2005 Report Share Posted April 12, 2005 Cared so much, his face runs wet Pulse slowing now, his fire burns yet Believed in things, he won't forget Heart's in chains, his challenge met Howls in pain, his anguish set His life itself, he would forfeit Sorrow grows, his eyes sunset Passion, tears, blood and sweat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted April 12, 2005 Report Share Posted April 12, 2005 swept me away with emotion !!! left a lump in my throat. Loved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted April 14, 2005 Report Share Posted April 14, 2005 oh wow. I'm sorry I missed this first time around. That's GOOD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mynx Posted April 14, 2005 Report Share Posted April 14, 2005 Beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da_Yog Posted April 15, 2005 Report Share Posted April 15, 2005 Regel, I like this a lot. Probably my favorite of what I've read of your poetry. Very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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