Regel Posted April 12, 2005 Report Posted April 12, 2005 Cared so much, his face runs wet Pulse slowing now, his fire burns yet Believed in things, he won't forget Heart's in chains, his challenge met Howls in pain, his anguish set His life itself, he would forfeit Sorrow grows, his eyes sunset Passion, tears, blood and sweat.
WrenWind Posted April 12, 2005 Report Posted April 12, 2005 swept me away with emotion !!! left a lump in my throat. Loved it.
Peredhil Posted April 14, 2005 Report Posted April 14, 2005 oh wow. I'm sorry I missed this first time around. That's GOOD.
Da_Yog Posted April 15, 2005 Report Posted April 15, 2005 Regel, I like this a lot. Probably my favorite of what I've read of your poetry. Very nice!
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