Gryphon Posted April 10, 2005 Report Posted April 10, 2005 Perspective ~~~ As I walk, The world creeps sideways, In the street lamps light, To hide behind a tree. The commuter: ~~~ I lie in wait, This morning, The bus is my natural prey.
Cerulean Posted April 12, 2005 Report Posted April 12, 2005 Hi Gryphon, I love poetic vignettes, so I enjoyed reading these. I especially liked your line: The world creeps sideways - great image. C
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