Sweetcherrie Posted March 26, 2005 Report Posted March 26, 2005 You made me feel stupid Heavy feelings Fill me up Please Can we forget? You said, I said, both shouted Then nothing Silence Ssh Should we talk? The silence grows louder Until outspoken Porcelain Words I still love you… Realisation sinks in It was not I Nor you Simply Miscommunication
Patrick Posted March 26, 2005 Report Posted March 26, 2005 Although I'm really bad at making well thought out comments about poetry, this poem felt pretty good to me. It leaves a lot of things unsaid, which the user shall have to put together for himself, like the two lines: Porcelaine and Words, where my interpretation is that silence is like porcelaine and words break it. The poem also reminds me of how many times miscommunication can cause problems in real life. Great poem in my opinion.
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