Loki Wyrd Posted March 26, 2005 Report Posted March 26, 2005 Focused on the foreground, You vaguely notice the background-- Swooning colors spitting out tension, While emitting chaos Upon your precious, tiny plane: Hung upon the wall and put up for display As an act of your persuasion. ------------------------------------------------ Ink sweating from my skin, An estuary, boiling. Printed on tattered parchment, Brittle as the wind Set ablaze with fall colors. Trenchant watercolor scheme Painted by the numbers.
Sweetcherrie Posted March 26, 2005 Report Posted March 26, 2005 Both of them are nice, but I like the second best. It gives me a feeling of creativity wanting to flow, but being caught by the rules of life. I have no idea if this was your intention, but I definitely enjoyed reading both of them. Thank you
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