Ayshela Posted March 7, 2005 Report Posted March 7, 2005 Once again, posting by request. *glares at Oz and hopes he'll stop poking me in the back* my children are home even when they're away for however they roam their hearts find the way to safety, secure in the love that they find which helps them feel sure though they roam, I won't mind when they wander back in with a smile and say "I love you, it's been an astonishing day" they carry their home tucked away in their hearts safe in love, though they roam, always close, though apart ~~~~~~~ i got to hold my girl tonight and for a moment keep her safe before returning her to life resentfully sending her on her way i wish that i could keep her here my other daughter, child of mine if i could only hold her near and keep her safe for all of time then i would count myself content and heaven blessed to have her here without a reason to resent those who'd control my girl, my dear
Sweetcherrie Posted March 7, 2005 Report Posted March 7, 2005 I love them both, they describe such loving feeling. Thank you for posting this. *thanks Oz for poking* -Sweetcherrie
Loki Wyrd Posted March 7, 2005 Report Posted March 7, 2005 Why wouldn't you want to post these? Keeping them all to yourself wouldn't be very nice. Just think of us poor, repressed souls without a poem to read.
Ayshela Posted March 7, 2005 Author Report Posted March 7, 2005 because these weren't intended to be anything more than messages to my "adopted daughter" posted in my livejournal, and this is just the way they came out... and even beyond that, because i'm not in the habit of posting first drafts, written in the "compose message" screen.
Gwaihir Posted March 7, 2005 Report Posted March 7, 2005 Well, thank you for posting them anyway! I for one really enjoyed them.
Zariah Posted March 7, 2005 Report Posted March 7, 2005 It's an honor that you share your personal work here at the Pen. These particular two are so loving, and genuine. Thank you so very much, for trustnig all of us with part of you. *Hugs* ~Katy
Ayshela Posted March 8, 2005 Author Report Posted March 8, 2005 Gwai, Katy - thank you =) i've not only been assured, but have seen over time, that if i put a piece of my heart here it won't be stepped on. i appreciate that more than i can say. i'm glad you all liked them. =)
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