Loki Wyrd Posted February 13, 2005 Report Posted February 13, 2005 To eliminate my pride (clumsy as it is) my redeemer made a failure to juxtapose me with. Now no angst will deter, nor stomach resist, what my eyes have tried to make me miss: I'm not forsaken but by myself. No longer complacent-- thanks to the mirror's help.
Nyyark Posted February 13, 2005 Report Posted February 13, 2005 Nice, I like word choice and rythem. I think your talking about self-disatisfaction and the desire to change, but I'm not totally sure. If you are I can definately relate to the mood and feelings expressed. Prolly why I like it so much.
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