Falcon2001 Posted February 10, 2005 Report Posted February 10, 2005 Incidentally, I wrote this while listening to Four Tet - She Moves She, which is a track with no lyrics. Excellent beat. What would you do if tomorrow didn't rise Didn't poke it's head above the trees Would you stare in amazement, wondering why Or would you invert your gaze and try your best to flee? If your life became X instead of Y How would you cope with the pain Would you suck it all up and prepare for the best Or try it get it going again? Would you cry yourself to sleep in your cold dark room Trying your best not to freeze? Or would you ask yourself why you relied on the sun And instead change the way you look at reality Instead of a dark world a new experience An existence free of sunburn and pain A world where noon doesn't require a shade And midnight is much less extreme In short - what is existence A passing dream with a outside of pain? Or is it the beginning and end (Alpha/omega) And the reasoning behind all the pain? If I died right now would my words survive To carry on without my soul's flame Or would I wake up in a world where the sun doesn't rise Existing only to start it over again?
Tattered Posted February 10, 2005 Report Posted February 10, 2005 Very cool. You'll notice I am not one to give constructive criticism because I am no expert. However, I recognize talent when I see it. I liked the rythm here, Yah to 4 Tet! I like to do that some times, write with music in the background. Very thought provoking your little idea about waking to no sun and your life becoming y instead of x...I really like that. Insightful.
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