WrenWind Posted January 27, 2005 Report Posted January 27, 2005 (edited) silence is such a rare thing motors hum pipes still ping out side the snow blankets all muffling the sound of city tall but still the sound of the bustle comes from all around some times I need to hide from all the noise and people tide walk in the wood lie down in the loam silence is good Edited January 27, 2005 by WrenWind
Peredhil Posted January 27, 2005 Report Posted January 27, 2005 nods heartfelt sympathy. Hugs Yeah....
DL_Snake Posted January 27, 2005 Report Posted January 27, 2005 oooh wrenny!!! i like it in the way it makes sense of everyday life...however the only thing i dont like is the rhytm from the first 2 stanzas' first lines...a bit too long as compared to the following lines (the rhytm from the other stanzas fit quite perfectly i think)...just my two cents =]
HappyBuddha Posted January 28, 2005 Report Posted January 28, 2005 squeezes your hand and gives you a hug
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