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Sorry for filling up the Banquet Hall with my posts. For the ones that actually have titles I like to start a new thread. Besides, I'm not so sure anyone actually looks at the ones I post in the longer threads...not that I want anyone to look at this one necessarily. :) But it's short, so an easy read. Prompted by the word 'meniscus.'

 

 

 

The meniscus rises

as beads of water

slowly run down the glass.

Each tributary joining with the body,

becoming just another reason

for my eye level to shift.

Edited by Loki Wyrd
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pretty good. IMHO, simple observations of that which is around you is the best foundation for writers to drawn from.

 

 

:)

 

revery

the dreamlost

"you can't write, if you can't relate..." (beck/loser)

the dream continues...

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