AnneTheEmo Posted January 5, 2005 Report Posted January 5, 2005 Everything I learned about hate- I learned from you. I could never live with the guilt as you do. And you're so sunk into apathy, it's disgusting- but it's not my style to waste my breath on you. Trying to explain the reasons why I turned out the way I did- I can't say I blame you For all that I did.
Peredhil Posted January 5, 2005 Report Posted January 5, 2005 Powerful. Nice resolution, hints of taking control away from the other and embracing it yourself. Hate is a powerful emotion, but basically a helpless one, because the one hating spends their time thinking about the other one instead of helping themself and others. Too often the object of hatred, as is hinted in this case, doesn't feel guilt at all. Most people are Right in their own minds, and everyone has an excuse. By the way, Welcome to the Pen. Hugs
sweetnightmare Posted January 5, 2005 Report Posted January 5, 2005 Reads and thinks* I like the pure emotion in this, it makes me think of times that i could relate to it keep writing.
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