Falcon2001 Posted December 21, 2004 Report Posted December 21, 2004 Alright, here's where you can talk about Shame Road, either comments to me on writing or talking/arguing about what it's all about. I'm not enlightening you guys until it's done.
Peredhil Posted December 21, 2004 Report Posted December 21, 2004 OH! Let me move my comment here. Good stuff, good to read you again! I'll delete from the main thread. *hugs*
Gryphon Posted December 21, 2004 Report Posted December 21, 2004 (edited) For what it's worth sorry for cluttering up your main thread the way I did. I dont think I can move / delete posts the way Peredhil can, but I can promise to not post any more that'll get in the way in there. Edit: Turns out I can delete my own posts - or I've got a delete button anyway. I'll remove my comment from there and re-post it here if it lets me. Edited December 21, 2004 by Gryphon
Gryphon Posted December 21, 2004 Report Posted December 21, 2004 I love the way you're writing this. Most fascinating watching the interactions of the 4 'voices'. Settles back to watch and read with interest.
Venefyxatu Posted December 21, 2004 Report Posted December 21, 2004 Venefyxatu sneakily teleports his comments this way. I'm going to help Gryphon keep his "End of world button" pushed - just to make sure it doesn't end before you finish this story I find it fascinating that I'm still not sure about the voices... do they "live" "inside" Jeral (as in : they're either personified personality traits or creatures residing in his mind), or are they separate entities that are watching him? Don't tell me yet... I want to figure it out for myself
Falcon2001 Posted December 22, 2004 Author Report Posted December 22, 2004 I wasn't complaining, just figured it'd be easier here
HappyBuddha Posted December 25, 2004 Report Posted December 25, 2004 (What I said on the main thread, moved to here): "The voices make an interesting dialogue, but I'm puzzled by their inability to influence his actions; they seem outside observers. At the point where they seem directly planted to exert an influence on his actions, thats very curious. Of course, that just increases the reader's curiosity. I don't think this can sustain itself as anything more than a short story; it starts too fast for anything super far reaching."
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