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[Zariah]

Sometimes

(Only sometimes)

Do I feel an

Empty

Longing…

 

A longing to be free:

….from Expectation

...from Obligation

...from Temptation

….from Evaluation.

 

I can try every day

(well almost)

With sincere

Intention

To fill my heart:

 

….with Interaction

….with Relaxation

….with Calm reaction

….with Satisfaction.

 

If I can learn

Through experience

And find my

own way….

 

I can finally:

....have self-fulfillment

….have decisiveness

….have courage

….have enjoyment in my life.

 

And my journey can lead me onward.

[The Death of Rats]

*claps softly, toebones clicking somewhat*

[reverie]

ah... i love the use of parathesees in the 1st and 3rd stanza...

 

it's personalizes it and gives it depth... i think... like a sketch artistest discovering how to shade for the first time...

 

cool.

 

revery

the dreamlost

"inverness"

the dream continues...

[Nyyark]

You nailed it Rev, thats the same feeling I got from it.

 

Awsome job Zariah!