purple_shadows Posted December 11, 2004 Report Posted December 11, 2004 Have you ever been afraid of life of love of god? What if you're not really afraid of what you think you're afraid of? What if you're really just afraid of losing it? of not being good enough Have you ever wanted to scream and shout at the top of your lungs for all the injustices that have been caused? that you've caused What if no one is really out there who hears you? What if we really are all alone? What if I jump and no one's there to catch me? then what? would this still be worth the risk? things are always scary when you're learning to let go
Nyyark Posted December 11, 2004 Report Posted December 11, 2004 I like it! Its like an emotional impact, whose force is built line by line, with the meaning and logic captured in the last two lines, recalibrating the stunned reader. Nice job Purple Shadows.
Ayshela Posted December 29, 2004 Report Posted December 29, 2004 a small multitude of intertwined questions which demand answers which demand truth which demand honesty, from ourselves which demand honesty, from others a small multitude of intertwined questions which takes courage to ask i'm glad you asked.
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